細節問題務必要當心丨暑期晨讀vol.24

2019-08-30 19:09:38


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在昨天的作業批改之前,有幾點關於寫作的問題想提醒各位同學,我發現很多同學都存在這些問題。大家務必要注意了,不要因為是一些小問題,就忽略。

提醒


作文練習時要注意:
1.一定要注意小問題,平時養成好習慣,避免犯標點符號,拼寫錯誤等問題。
2.問句一定要用問號結尾。
3.不要把句子結構寫得太過複雜,意思表達清楚為首要要求。
4.從句不可當作獨立句使用;兩個以上獨立句不可僅以逗號連接,要麼加並列連詞,要麼其中一個改用從句。 


01

1.Will you please是個問句喲,結尾用問號。 


02

1.Generally speaking 這一句沒什麼語法錯誤,但個別用詞不準。建議改為:Generally speaking , you did offer us a good opportunity for practice.
2.Because ….去掉because, 因為它是引導從句的,但此句為獨立句。 
3.Can you tell us …這是問句,結尾用問號。 
4.In order to be prepared 改為 so that we can make preparation in advance.  


03

1.Join the English corner at the first time 改為 participated in the ….for the first time last week. 
2.The service you offer here it 。it 改為is ; generally speaking 後加逗號
3.However後加逗號
4.Will you prolong the time we spend in English …這句話轉為中文你發現問題了嗎?你自己花的時間為什麼需要別人去延長?可改為 prolong the time for English corner
5.In that many …去掉 in that [ in that 是用來引導從句的,但此處為獨立句]
6.View it as great chances …發現有問題嗎? It 是單數,chances為什麼是複數呢?
7.If the subjects are told 本身沒有錯,但told 改為given會更好 


04

1.Most of students 改為 most students即可
2.Which give rise to the ….這句太彆扭了,改為 so quite a number of English lovers miss the good chance . 
3.Inform us about ..改為 inform us of ….
4.Topic of interaction 去掉of interaction 
5.Because …這句改為because we do need more time for preparation


05

1.Will you please是個問句,記得用問號
2.Most of students用most students即可;另外,most..這句和後面it is ..這句都是兩個獨立句。在英語中,兩個獨立句不可僅以逗號連接。可加but. [但是此處還需要加上一句才能和上面的問題連貫起來,思考下怎麼加吧。]
3.We want to the ….. 改為 We need to know the them / topic of the English corner to make preparation. 
4.If it is possible 去掉
5.We will …改為it will be highly appreciated. 



接上昨天的內容

開始今天的晨讀
別忘了讀熟、背誦哦

聲音資源加載中...

晨讀素材


Dear citizens,    

I am writing this letter to you in an effort to urge you to stop smoking in public places as soon as possible.

It’s long been known that smoking endangers everyone’s mental and physical health. Smoking in public not only harms the smoker’s health but put others at risk. Smoking in public is an uncivilized behavior which should be banned. It is high time that we should quit smoking in public places.

We can breathe in clean air in public areas so long as smokers drive combined efforts to give up smoking there.


Yours faithfully
Li Ming


課代表筆記


首先請看到題目。
Directions: 
You are supposed to writing a letter to citizens to propose the ban of smoking in the public places. 你被建議寫一封信,來幹什麼?來propose,來提議,the ban of,ban叫做禁止,吸煙,in the public places。


我們一起來看一下。


Dear citizens,    
I am writing this letter to you in an effort to urge you to stop smoking in public places as soon as possible.
首先上來第一段話呢,是一個寫作目的,我寫這封信,in an effort to,為了什麼什麼,相當於我們所説的in order to。urge to叫做敦促某人做某事,stop smoking in public places as soon as possible。


第二段,It’s long been known that,那麼It’s long been known 這個's是has的意思,相當於説It has long been known,很長時間以來,眾所周知,怎麼樣呢?smoking endangers everyone’s mental and physical health,那麼吸煙,會傷害到每個人的mental and physical,就是身體和心理上的健康。


Smoking in public,這是一個動名詞來做主語,not only...but,also可以省略,不僅會傷害到吸煙者的健康,也會put others at risk,也會把別人呢,放在一個危險的境地。


Smoking in public is an uncivilized behavior which should be banned.抽煙在公眾場合其實是一個不文明的行為,後面有一個which引導的定語從句,這個行為應該被禁止。


It is high time that we should quit smoking in public places. It is high time後面可以接that句型,那句型當中的謂語動詞應該用動詞的過去時,或者是should do,也可以説成叫it It is high time that we quit,因為quit這個單詞的過去式還是quit,那也可以用should quit,都可以。


最後一段話,We can breathe in clean air in public areas so long as smokers drive combined efforts to give up smoking there.我們可以呼吸到新鮮的空氣,該尊重場合,只要我們的吸煙者drive combined efforts to,那麼大家一起來推動,共同的努力,來放棄抽煙。


然後,Yours faithfully,Li Ming可以寫成Yours,Li Ming,faithfully可以不寫。



課後作業


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